Tuesday 25 October 2011

Chilled..Seductive..Lonely..

Ek sihran si rom rom mein,
Dhadkan yu bhaagti,
Jaise ki thamna jaanti na ho,
saanson mein dhuaan,
maddham maddham,
aankho mein nasha,
behka behka,
bheege se khwab,
palkon mein chup chaap,
ek toofaan sa,
ik aandhi si,
madhosh kar dene waala,
behti hawaa ka shor,
aah bharti hui main,
is thand ke mausam mein,
kuchh aur tanha ho jaati hoon....

6 comments:

Neeraj Mallick said...

This is the best way to describe how awesome you feels sometimes...and all you wants to stop the time for that very moment....loved these lines...

superb wordings....

Aparna Gautam said...

Zabardasti comment karwaane ka lutf hi kuchh aur hai :p

Savvy said...

While trying to start off with the header, actualized that its an absolute "Stunner". Only picturizing the words in isolation.. will make an adequate input.

Advancing along with the lyric .. Aquivering, Enhanced pulsation, Smoggy Respiration indicates Chill..

The "Eye" term is perfectly placed at Mid lines. Inebriated Oculus and that too, with dreams.. frames me speechless.. Yes, Seduction does conquer..

Then comes the "Wind" .. with its hypnotic effects and nails down the feelings with a suspire..

To end with the word "Lonely", there is and will always be a big difference between unaccompanied and unequaled.. And author is certainly the latter one ..

Keep sensing .. :)

Aparna Gautam said...

Hey Savvy :) I am going to start a new blog just for your comments. Each one is so damn precious :)

VARUN said...

Jab raat ki tanhai dil ban ke dharakti hai...
yaadon ke dareechon main chilman si sirakti hai...
yun payar nahin chupta, palkon ke jhukanay se..
aankhon ke lifafon main tehreer chamakti hai..
khush rang parindon ke laut aanay ke din aaye...
bichray huway miltay hain jab baraf pighalti hai...

Aparna Gautam said...

Varun, you did shut me up after that comment !! :)