restless, helpless,
and then when it doesnt work out,
it leaves you blackmailed,
it leaves you tortured,
it leaves you threatened,
of acid on your face,
it leaves you strangled,
hanging from the fan,
it leaves your wrist bleeding,
it leaves you lying bruised and raped,
in a jungle or on an abandoned road side,
it leaves you unprotected and unpopular,
it leaves you on facebook,
as a status message,laughing at you,
it leaves you alive but more dead,
with every second,
it leaves you ashamed and embarassed,
in front of everyone you know,
it leaves you in a very sad state of mind,
it leaves repenting every second,
you wish you had never loved,
never knew this deception,
this lie.....
p.s. today love leaves you ugly. we all know about the positives of being in love but there is another side of the coin too. love, no one is stopping you, infact when love strikes no one can stop you, not even yourself. but just be careful. take your decisions in a calm state of mind. keep a confidant. keep someone informed of your steps so that you can be rescued before things get out of hand. love is important and you cannot escape from its charm. but just remember, what's more important is you and your well - being. take care!
17 comments:
Superlike poetry...i can feel each n every line of it as i hv seen all these with me and with others...even then u cant stop urself frm falling in love...u cant learn anything from known mistakes in love... is the only thing which u cant resist,even after knowning its consequences .
That was such an encouraging comment. This just inspires me to express more. I truly agree with what you said about love being so tempting but I feel 'awareness' could save some bad from happening. Thanks Neeraj :)
Nice words to remind me how painful this word is. Such a speaking words in their own. Appreciate.
Thanks for sharing your thought Fazal ji :) agli baar dhamki na deni pade. Khud hi aa jaiyega yahaan. ;)
' it leaves repenting every second,
you wish you had never loved,
never knew this deception,
this lie..... '
Very nicely did. Carry on, waiting for your next.
Thanks Arjun :) its for appreciation like this that inclination towards writing more and more increases.
Words always create wonders , and here we see it in your WORDS !! Very practical and touching , keep creating such wonders !!
And for this side of coin :
kitaabon mein chhapate hain chaahat ke kisse..
hakikat kee duniyaan mein chaahat naheen hai..
jamaane ke baajar mein ye wo shay hai
ke jis kee kisee ko jarurat naheen hai..
ye bekaar, bedaam kee cheej hai..!!
Musafir ji aho bhagya humaare ki aap padhaare :) itni khubsoorat panktiyon mein aapne saare vichaar ko samet diya.... Aate rahiyega :)
wow.. such simple words and such deep feelings.. a cute poem showing a different different picture of love/ very nice..:)
Thank you Gurnaam ji :)
Lintel represents the Orthography of a hemorrhaging heart, in my view..
Normally originating with a strike (of any sort), and then proceeding further to advanced stages.. Predilection.. Occupancy of intellections.. this phenomena called "Love" seems quite magnetic. In defiance of that, the "Acidulous line" is definitely a simpatico.
Yes, Sometimes the mirror is not broken, its the shattered image of subject instead.
Am perfectly in accordance with the necessity of Friendship cited. A shoulder is of great help, in both delight and grief.
And as I do always, will finish off with Author's Lines - Take Care..
Lovely poem, itnaa dard ki lagta hai saara dard utar kar iss poem mein aa gayaa hai........ Liked it!!
keep writing!
Thank you Savvy for a brilliant comment.
Thank you aphysio :)
i liked the ps more than the poem. holds so good in my case right now. </3 i am. now.
All I'd say to you Monu, is -- Take Care!!!
beautiful. take care has a whole new meaning to it now! :)
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